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Friday, February 21, 2014

A Taste of Friday First Chapters with William Burt and Torsils in Time

TORSILS IN TIME
 
BOOK II in the “King of the Trees” series

by William D. Burt

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Cover by Terri L. Lahr. Illustrations by Rebecca J. Burt and Terri L. Lahr. Llwcymraeg translations by Lyn Mererid.
ISBN 1-57921-368-5 Library of Congress Catalog Card Number: 2001087336



 “For the Word of God is living and active and sharper than any two-edged sword, and piercing as far as the division of soul and spirit, of both joints and marrow, and able to judge the thoughts and intentions of the heart. And there is no creature hidden from His sight, but all things are open and laid bare to the eyes of Him with whom we have to do.” Hebrews 4:12–13 (NASB)


In loving memory of Erica Lahr-Auvil


Prologue: Of Crowns & Quill Pens

K
raawwk! Kraawwk! Timothy son of Garth looked up to see an ill-favored, pink-headed bird perched in the tree above him. Eating his lunch of rye bread and cheese, he sat alone in the whispering wood, having no sisters, brothers or other playmates.
As usual, his father was somewhere between Beechtown and the Green Sea, poling his raft up the River Foamwater. A flaxen-haired boy of ten, Timothy wished Garth could spend more time with him, especially during the summer—a raftsman’s busiest season. Timothy’s mother Nora took in laundry, scrubbing the soiled tunics of the rollicking bargemen and raftsmen who stopped in Beechtown to test their landlegs.
Timothy whiled away many an idle June afternoon in the forests above Beechtown hunting squirrels and pheasants or spying on stoats and badgers, salamanders and snakes. Still hungry after his meager meal, he picked a few wild strawberries, popping the sweet, fragrant fruits into his mouth.
As the ruff-necked bird raucously croaked again, Timothy saw it was a vulture. The carrion eater was tugging and pecking at something, no doubt a poor dead thing stuck in the tree. Then Timothy’s keen eye caught a metallic luster—perhaps the point of a huntsman’s arrow lodged in a limb. He had often seen crows carry off coins and other shiny objects with which to brighten their drab, untidy nests—but never vultures. Failing to pilfer the pretty, the bird squawked and flew away.
Timothy smiled. Such a lot of fuss over a snippet of steel! Just then, a wind gust waded through the foliage, caressing the polished leaves into rustling curls and setting the “arrowhead” to twirling and flashing. Timothy wished he could view the mysterious object through a starglass, such as riverboat captains often used. He sighed and made a face. Owning a starglass was out of the question; one of those long tubes with their glass lenses would cost his father a month’s wages. If he wanted to see what had so attracted the vulture, he’d have to climb the tree.
Ten minutes later, moss-grimed and well winded, Timothy had reached a gnarled limb halfway up the tortoiseshell trunk. Crawling out on the branch, he found a black satchel, its strap caught on a couple of crooked twigs. Sunlight glinted off a metal clasp securing a wide flap to the case’s front.
Timothy gave a low whistle. Some wily highwayman—maybe Bartholomew the Bold himself—must have flung the satchel into this tree while fleeing a sheriff’s posse, intending to retrieve his loot later. “Catcher, keeper, thief’s a weeper,” Timothy chortled. Whatever was inside, it now belonged to him.
Freeing the tangled strap, he hefted the grimy satchel, which looked as though it had hung in the tree for quite a spell. Though heavy, the case didn’t rattle or clink the way a pouch of gold and jewels would. When the rusted catch refused to open, he looped the strap around his neck, wriggled back down the tree and set off for home, clutching the case to his chest.
After crossing the Beechtown bridge, he ducked into an alley to avoid notice—but not quickly enough. Someone had been waiting for him. “Hey! It’s Garth the River-Rover’s brat!” growled Baglot son of Baldwyn, the brash town bully. “I thought I told you never to show your ugly mug around here again!”
As Timothy broke into a run, Baglot and his gang gave chase, catcalling, “Tim-my boy, the tin-ker’s son, watch him run, O what fun! Tim-my boy, the tinker’s son, go hide in your hole by the waa-ter!”
Whizzz! A stone sailed over Timothy’s head. Another struck him in the thigh. He vaulted a fence and hopped into a drainage ditch, where he crouched among some cattails.
When the hoots and cries had died away, Timothy crept out of the ditch and limped along the riverbank to his parents’ thatched hut. Beside it sat his father’s ramshackle shed. Inside the shed, broken furniture, warped wagon wheels and pitted pieces of iron littered the floor. In his spare time, Garth repaired and sold cast-off odds and ends to help his family eke out a living.
After rubbing away his tears and catching his breath, Timothy set the satchel on Garth’s workbench, noting a peculiar emblem embossed on the side. Arranged in a crowned “W,” a gold circlet and four quill pens rested on an open-book design.
Convinced the symbol must be the mark of royalty or nobility, Timothy pried open the latch with a chisel. As he raised the flap, a musty, furry smell escaped.
“Papers?” he groaned. “All that work for a bunch of moldy papers!” Stomping out the door with the case, he was about to fling the whole lot into the river when he realized that the owner might pay a handsome price for the satchel’s return. Besides, its contents might make interesting reading. Thanks to his grandmother’s training, Timothy had already devoured all the books he could lay hands on, and his parents could ill afford to satisfy his demand for more.
After settling down on the riverbank, he removed all the stacks of parchments from the satchel. Then he upended and shook it. Only a frayed quill pen fell out, its hollow tip heavily scored as if by a knife or file. Squinting at the spidery script squiggling across the stiff, yellowed papers, Timothy read, “Be it hereby enacted by the power vested in me . . .”
Grappling with more flowery terms, he came upon the names, “King Rolin” and “Queen Marlis” penned in bold letters. His first hunch hadn’t been far from the mark; it seemed he had discovered the records of a royal court. More references to the king and queen were sprinkled throughout the following pages.
Then he came to a thick sheaf of parchments bound with green and purple cords. Across the front, someone had scrawled the words, “Torsils in Time.” Torsils? Timothy pictured pea-green lizards with powerful tails and long, forked, flickering tongues. Chewing on a river grass stem, he read further.


  
Chapter 1: The Black Pearls

R
olin, King of Lucambra whistled as he hurried down the familiar cobbled path along the bluffs above the Sea of El-marin. Just before entering a thick pine wood, he paused, thinking he’d heard footsteps. Putting a long wooden tube to his eye, he perused the empty trail behind him. Then he focused on a balcony high on the Tower of the Tree, where a bright-faced woman was waving a white kerchief.
“Goodbye, my queen,” murmured Rolin, waving back. “I shan’t be long!” Pocketing the starglass, he strode into the forest.
On this fine autumn morning, the sunlight was slanting through the treetops to caress red-capped pogankas sprouting on the forest floor. Ordinarily, Rolin would have tarried to admire the striking colors of those deadly mushrooms. However, he was anxious to take in the last day of Beechtown’s annual fall market, where he hoped to meet his father, Gannon son of Hemmett.
Once among the poorest of Beechtown’s hill folk, Gannon no longer made his living as a vendor at the spring and fall markets. Thanks to the rubies and emeralds his son had pocketed from the sorcerer Felgor’s hoard, Gannon still lived very simply but much more comfortably. Peddling his prize honey and potatoes was now only a pleasant pastime.
Today, Rolin had shed his royal robes for the homespun jerkin and leggings of a Thalmosian hill dweller, the better to blend into the crowds of marketgoers. A floppy, broad-brimmed hat topped off the disguise, hiding his auburn hair.
At length Rolin came to a mossy-barked tree whose branches spread like many-jointed arms. “Is anybody home?” he called, tapping on the trunk. He heard only a rumbling rattle in reply. How trees snored—being noseless and all—was a mystery to Rolin. Rat-tat-a-tat-tat, he rapped again on the whorled bark.
“Umph, who’s there?” croaked a creaky voice. Owing to the scent of amenthil blossoms, Lucambrians could converse with trees and other forest dwellers, a secret they jealously guarded from their Thalmosian neighbors.
“It’s me, Rolin. Wake up!” Lately, Lightleaf had been dozing most of the day. After all, he was over four hundred years old.
“Forgive me, my lord,” yawned the tree. “I was just enjoying the most marvelous dream: It was autumn, the poppies were blooming, and—”
“It is autumn, you silly torsil!” Rolin laughed. “You shouldn’t be sleeping away such fine fall weather.”
“Why can’t a tree take a nap without all the neighbors complaining? Humph. I suppose you want passage.”
“I do—if you don’t mind, that is.”
Lightleaf sighed. “I suppose not, but only if you promise not to disturb me again until my dream is finished.”
“That could take months!” Rolin retorted. “I’ll be gone all day, so you can dream away until I return.” Climbing the tree, Rolin took care not to scuff off any bark. At the top, he looked back at the tower, its colorful flags and banners waving. Still higher, a griffin lazily circled in the sky. Any enemy with designs on Queen Marlis or the Hallowfast would first have to reckon with Ironwing.
Before climbing down, Rolin lightly rubbed his finger under one of the torsil’s shiny leaves. The tree shivered, making a sound not unlike a sneeze.
“Whuff!” wheezed Lightleaf. “You know how I hate being tickled. Stop it at once, or I won’t let you back into Lucambra!”
Rolin chuckled, knowing the tree was only bluffing. Like most torsils, Lightleaf could be touchy—even cantankerous. However, the tree had never refused him passage. It helped that Rolin always avoided breaking any of his friend’s branches.
“Touch the top, then drop,” he told himself, repeating the rhyme all Lucambrian children learned when they were old enough to climb trees. Though Thalmosian by birth, Rolin was half Lucambrian and had learned the first rule of torsil travel: If you didn’t climb all the way to the top of a tree of passage before starting down again, you wouldn’t go anywhere at all. You might as well have climbed a cherry or an alder for all your trouble.
After a moment’s dizziness and tingling—the only side effects of making passage—Rolin alit on Thalmosian soil. Though he’d often traveled between the two worlds, the abrupt change of scenery was still unsettling. Gone were the bright-needled pines and high sandstone cliffs overlooking the Sea of El-marin. In their place stood a stolid fir forest marching down from the Tartellans’ craggy, snow-clad peaks, now flushed pink with the dawn.
Rolin bade Lightleaf farewell and made off down the mountainside. Following paths known only to him and a few trusted Lucambrian scouts, he came at last to the River Foamwater.
Melting into the crowd crossing the new Beechtown bridge, Rolin fell in behind a boy and girl accompanying a lanky “Greencloak,” as Lucambrians were called in Thalmos. He couldn’t help overhearing their conversation.
“Thank you, Father, for letting me join you and Sylvie today,” the boy bubbled, his mop of hazel hair bouncing with each step.
“I did promise you a visit to the market before your thirteenth birthday,” sighed the long-legged man, whom Rolin recognized as a Lucambrian woodcarver named Gaflin son of Hargyll. Rolin guessed the lumpy bag he carried contained wooden bowls, cups, spoons and trinkets for sale. “Since it’s the final day of the market, you might find some rare bargains, if you’re lucky.”
“Oh, I hope so,” beamed the boy. “Say, what are all these yeg statues on the bridge? They’re awfully ugly.”
His sister rolled her eyes. “Oh, Arvin. Don’t you know anything? King Rolin petrified those batwolves in the Battle of Beechtown. So many fell into the Foamwater that they dammed up the river and made this bridge.”
“Lifelike, aren’t they?” remarked Gaflin, running his fingers over a stone yeg’s razor-edge teeth. “I’m glad we cleaned these cursed creatures out of Lucambra.”
Arvin pointed out some snarling statues standing by a shop entrance. “Then why do people keep them by their doors?”
Gaflin snorted. “They’re supposed to scare other yegs away. They don’t, of course. Even the birds pay them no mind. See? There’s a nest on that one.”
Arvin gestured at two more statues flanking another doorway. “What about those? They don’t look like the others.”
“That’s because they’re man-made,” his father replied. “When the Thalmosians ran out of whole petrified batwolves to guard their homes, they started carving their own. If you ask me, they’re even uglier than the real thing.”
Rolin grimaced. Gargoyles, the townspeople called their grotesque sculptures, evidently a corruption of the Lucambrian word, “yeggoroth.”
“I only hope your starglass peddler won’t drive you too hard a bargain,” Gaflin was saying to Arvin. “Most of his kind are cheats and ne’er-do-wells. Have you enough gilders for the thing?”
The boy held up a leather sack. “I don’t need any money to buy my starglass. I’ll just trade for it.”
“I’m sure any peddler would love to have one of your frogs,” sneered Sylvie. “Or did you steal Mother’s rings to barter with?”
“They’re not frogs or rings, and I didn’t steal them; I found—” Arvin began. He broke off, the back of his neck flushing pink.
His fair-haired sister pawed at the pouch with greedy fingers. “So there is something valuable in this bag of yours! Come on, open it; I want to see what’s inside.”
Arvin pressed the sack to his chest. “Stay away from me!”
“I don’t care what you’ve got in there,” Gaflin said. “Just be sure to find me once you have your starglass. Remember: Not a word about the torsils! These potato eaters are a crafty lot.”
Rolin chuckled. Since becoming king, he had encouraged his people to trade freely with the “potato eaters,” who differed from Lucambrians mainly in their broader stature, more boisterous ways and eye color. (Lucambrians’ eyes were a deep green.) Lucambrians also lived much longer than their neighbors.
Visiting Beechtown was not without its risks. Some nosy potato eater might trail a Greencloak back to a torsil, and that would be the end of tranquil Lucambra. A flood of Thalmosians would surely follow, unless the Lucambrians cut down all the torsils leading to their sister world—an unthinkable act.
“There he is!” cried Arvin, darting away. Curious to see how the boy would fare with the starglass peddler, Rolin followed. Like as not, a sadder and wiser Arvin would come away from the market empty handed.
The wizened starglass peddler and his stall had been fixtures at the spring and fall markets longer than Rolin could remember. Nobody knew where the old codger lived, but everyone knew what he did: He sold the magical tubes, and nothing else. Not horses or hogs, baskets or beads, hammers or harnesses—just starglasses, and everybody wanted one.
As Rolin pushed his way through the milling marketgoers, he noticed a squat bulldog of a man talking to Arvin. “Whatcha got in yer pouch, boy?” The stranger reached for the sack.
Arvin recoiled from the man’s hairy paw. “Nothing!”
Rolin wedged his body between Arvin and the pickpocket. “Begone, ruffian, or I’ll have you thrown in irons!” he roared.
The thug brandished a long knife. “If it’s trouble ye’re wantin’, I’ll give ye plenty!” he snarled, showing a mouthful of broken, discolored teeth.
Crack! Rolin’s starglass struck the thief’s hand, knocking the knife away. Muttering a stream of oaths, the man slunk off.
“Fawnk you, fine fur!” mumbled Arvin, whose bobbing head reminded Rolin of a spring-necked doll’s. His bulging cheeks wobbled like a fat dowager’s.
“What did you say?” Rolin asked.
The left bulge disappeared, only to bolster the right one. “I said, ‘Thank you, kind sir!’”
Rolin burst into laughter at the sight of Arvin’s lopsided face. “Whatever have you got in your mouth?”
“My pearlf,” he replied with a guilty look. “I almoft fwallowed vem!”
Rolin grinned in sudden understanding. Arvin had scooped the pouch’s contents into his mouth, the better to hide them from the bulldog. Now, where had the son of a Lucambrian woodcarver gotten a mouthful of pearls?
“Might ye be lookin’ for one o’ these?” quavered a dry, cobbly voice. There stood a shriveled prune of a man dressed in a baggy black jerkin and breeches, his beak-nosed, weathered face wreathed in a toothless grin. Loose pink skin ringed his scrawny neck in wrinkled folds. In his clawlike hands, he held a wooden starglass elaborately inlaid with silver stars and a gold moon.
“Yeth. Pleeth,” Arvin lisped through his pearls.
Rolin frowned. The peddler looked different. For one thing, the starglass hawker he remembered had brown eyes, not these light-licking, coal-deep pits in a fawning, pockmarked face.
The old man must have noticed his gaze, for he winked and cackled, “I look just like the man in the moon, don’t ye think? Ye can see for yerself through my starglasses. They’re fifteen gilders this year.” He nodded at the wheeled stall behind him, where rows of glittering starglasses stood at attention along worn wooden shelves. Seeing Arvin’s despairing look, he hastened to add, “But for a young feller like you, I’ll make ’er ten.”
“Oi dot haf amy momey,” Arvin mumbled, evidently trying to dislodge a pearl from under his tongue.
The peddler clenched his fists. “Er ye playin’ games wi’ me, boy? If ye er, I’ll—” He broke off as Rolin shot him a stern glance.
Arvin shook his head until the pearls in his mouth rattled.
“Then give me yer money, an’ stop makin’ a dumb show!”
Grimacing, Arvin spat out five jet-black pearls into his cupped hands. At the sight of the marble-sized spheres, the peddler’s eyes bulged. Then he gripped Arvin’s arm with bony fingers.
“Come back here with me, boy,” he hissed, drawing Arvin behind the display table. “Even if ye haven’t the usual fee, those five will buy ye the best I got—this ’un here.” Unlocking an oaken cupboard, the hawker drew out the most exquisite starglass Rolin had ever seen. Fully a foot longer than its fellows, it was encased in gleaming silver and embellished with intricate eye designs.
The peddler held up a leather canister with a sturdy strap. “Comes wi’ its own case, too. Does it please yer fancy, young sir?” The old man licked his lips, his greedy gaze wavering between Arvin and Rolin.
“Yes, very much,” Arvin said, putting the starglass to his eye.
The peddler thrust his hand in front of the eyepiece. “No! Ye mustn’t look through it yet.”
Scowling, Arvin lowered the tube. “Why not?”
“Ah, the light down here is poor so early in th’ morning. Ye should wait awhile—say, an hour or so, until ye get home. The light’ll be better then.”
Arvin nodded and grudgingly slipped the starglass into its case. After dropping his payment into the peddler’s outstretched palm, he left Rolin to puzzle over the five black pearls.
The rarest of all gems, black pearls were found only in the El-marin’s southern waters. Even one was worth a king’s ransom—and Rolin had never seen such perfect specimens. They reminded him of the peddler’s fathomless, ebony eyes.
Convinced the boy had gotten the worst of the bargain, Rolin feigned an interest in some wicker baskets while watching the starglass peddler out of the corner of his eye. Though curious shoppers were still crowding around, the old man swept up his wares and climbed into the cramped confines of the rambling, rickety stall. As soon as the hinged doors had scraped shut, Rolin ambled over to press his ear against the caravan’s side.
The peddler’s raspy voice carried through the thin wooden wall. “I’d nearly given up hope, my pretty pets! But we knew he’d come along one day, didn’t we? Now we’ll be free of this stinking town. No more selling starglasses to grubby, half-witted street urchins and bumbling country bumpkins! Since we’ve done his bidding, we’ll be rid of him and his confounded riddle, too!

Of all the fish that are in the sea,
You must hook the one without the fee;
For in its mouth, it carries the prize
To purchase the power to mesmerize.

“I’d say we’ve found our ‘fish,’” the starglass vendor chortled. “It won’t be long before he takes the bait—and he’ll be only the first of many. Let’s hope he crosses over before using it.”

Rolin heard a ‘bang,’ and a hatch flew open in the top of the stall. “Fly, fly, to the five corners of the sky!” the peddler cried. With strangled croaks and a flurry of wings, five coal-black ravens flew out to scatter over Beechtown.

About the Author:
Having spent most of his teenage years vicariously adventuring in Middle Earth, the author is an avid fantasy fan. His first fantasy title, "The King of the Trees," came out in 1998 (first edition). While still in high school, he began his writing career editing his father's popular identification guides, "Edible and Poisonous Plants of the Western/Eastern States." As an Assistant Professor in the Special Education Department at Western Oregon University, he served as a successful grant-writer and program coordinator.
Burt holds a B.S. in English from Lewis and Clark College and an M.S. from Western Oregon University in Deaf Education. He is an RID-certified sign-language interpreter with over 40 years' experience. His interests include reading, foreign languages and mycology. He is married with two grown children.

Friday, February 14, 2014

A Taste of Friday with Janis Cox and Tadeo Turtle


Tadeo Turtle
by Janix Cox

Tadeo Turtle longs to be different. Through an exciting adventure he learns to accept how God has created him.
ISBN: 978-1-77069-695-2
Published: October 2012


Psalm 139:13-14
“You made all the delicate, inner parts of my body
and knit me together in my mother’s womb.
Thank you for making me so wonderfully complex!
Your workmanship is marvelous – how well I know it.”
(New Living Translation)


THE STORY

TADEO loved to laugh and play…

…until he met SAM SQUIRREL one day.

SAMMY loved to climb the trees,
cross the lawns and jump in leaves.

TADEO couldn’t run like that
because a shell was on his back.


His carapace* helped him hide
when he stuck his head inside.

·         Carapace – A hard outer covering or shell


One day TADEO had a dream.

To read the rest of the story please visit Janis’ website, He Cares for Us.

Notes:

This book was an inspiration from our Lord. During one of my daily devotionals the first draft of this story flowed. After edits and re-edits, drawing the pictures and finding a publisher – Tadeo was ready to roll. The name Tadeo has a story behind it.

When I first created Tadeo Turtle his name was Leroy. Then I tried Tommy as I liked the alliteration. However, on my husband’s prompting I searched the Net for possible problems with this name – a conflict occurred. After praying and searching again I checked baby names and found Tadeo – short form of Thaddeus, a disciple of Jesus. It means “praise”. And I did – praise the Lord.



Janis Cox is a faithful follower of Jesus. She is a wife, mother, grandmother, a sister and friend. Married to a wonderful husband they have three grown children who are married; they have six grandchildren and a new one on the way.

She is a writer, watercolour artist and person who always is involved in doing something. She has her fingers in many pies – but all of them are delicious. A friend once told her that she saw a vision of her – with a whole bunch of coloured balloons and she tried to capture each one of them.

As a former public school teacher she loved to write poems for her kids. With this background she has now published her first illustrated children’s book, Tadeo Turtle.

A blogger since 2008, Janis runs a group blog called Under the Cover of Prayer. She is a member of The Word Guild, Inscribe WritersJohn 316 Network and American Christian Writers. Her website is http://www.janiscox.com.

Saturday, February 8, 2014

Fantasy Books of Interest to Writers, Guest Post by Janalyn Voigt

Fantasy Books of Interest to Writers




DawnSinger: A headstrong young princess and the guardian sworn to protect her fly on winged horses to the Gate of Life above the Well of Light in a desperate bid to release the DawnKing, and the salvation he offers, into a divided land. Will they each learn in time that sometimes victory comes only through surrender?




 



WayFarer: When an untried youth ascends to the high throne of Faeraven, his mistakes tear kingdoms apart and allow just one chance at redemption. He must humble himself before the man he banished.






 

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I asked Janalyn a question that I was curious about. Her writing is beautiful. If you read her books, you will see what I mean. Her words are like art in motion, creating a storybook world full of adventurous beauty. Here is my question and her answer:

 

LORILYN:  What authors would you recommend a writer wanting to write fantasy read?

 
JANALYN:  I knew I’d face this question one day and have to admit the truth. Apart from discovering the novels of J.R.R. Tolkien and C.S. Lewis as an adult and having Peter Pan and the Wizard of Oz read to me as a child, I haven’t been exposed to many fantasy authors. I think this worked in my favor since people who read my fantasy stories tend to describe them as different and my voice as original. The fantasy authors I’ve read probably influenced my novels in subconscious ways, but if I’d read more fantasy I might have had to work hard to avoid overused prototypes within the genre.

When you allow other authors to influence your writing, there is a danger of being seen as a writer of derivative works. It is one thing to be compared favorably to Tolkien and quite another to be said to copy his writings. Readers of the epic fantasy genre do expect certain elements, but for a writer to stand out originality is important. That might seem a contradiction in terms, and striking a balance can be quite a dance, but to become established as a fantasy writer on your own merits it must be done.

Having said all that, there is value in reading good books of all kinds. Several fantasy authors are in my to-be-read pile. 

Eric Wilson, one of the endorsers of my debut novel, DawnSinger, has a Jerusalem Undead series I’ve wanted to pick up for a while now. I’m not really into vampire stories, but I attended a reading of one of his novels and found it quite good and glorifying of God’s power.

Tosca Lee’s Demon became an instant classic. It would be interesting to discover why. 

I enjoyed reading one of Donita K. Paul’s Dragonkeeper stories and would consider reading more of them. 

Lady Carliss and the Waters of Moorue by Chuck Black is an important book about the dangers of addiction. I’d like to read more by this author.

Someone once tried to insult me as a writer by complaining that my writing was like Stephen Lawhead’s. I took it as a compliment and now want to read his books, especially his Pendragon Cycle.

I’d like to find out why Ted Dekker is so popular. 

Jill Williamson’s Blood of Kings trilogy has a place on my shelves. I plan to read it this year.

Someone who read both my DawnSinger and Morgan Busse’s Daughter of Light emailed to tell me he found the stories remarkably alike. That piqued my interest, so I’ll be catching the books in her Follower of the Word series. 

After reading Michael Duncan’s Shadows, I was so impressed that I now have to read Revelation, the next in his Book of Aleth series. I’m a little prejudiced since Michael is a friend, but I predict great things for this gifted storyteller. 

I’ve heard good things about Bryan Sanderson’s Mistborn series. 

Frank Peretti, who started the whole speculative trend in the CBA, is releasing a new book, Illusion. 

James L. Rubart writes intriguing supernatural fiction novels, and I want to catch up on reading them. Rooms is his first novel. 

After David Burrows and I met online and discovered our mutual love of epic fantasy, we exchanged books. I’m looking forward to reading his The Prophecy of the Kings series. 

Michelle Griep has a medieval time travel novel out entitled Gallimore and a Viking time travel novel entitled Undercurrent. Both sound wonderful. 

Not but not least, Lorilyn Roberts has a beautiful young adult story entitled Seventh Dimension: The Door that I’ve been meaning to catch.

I’m looking forward to discovering more great fantasy authors in the future.

Care to share your own favorites?


LORILYN:  I am laughing because we share similar favorites. I love C.S. Lewis and J.R.R. Tolkien. The first author that turned me on to Christian fantasy was Frank Peretti. Then I fell in love Randy Alcorn's fiction books. I suppose it was Randy who made me want to write fiction as I saw him weaving Christian themes into contemporary issues, like Down's Syndrome and abortion. I don't know why, but until then I thought that would be taboo - that no one would put controversial subjects like that in a Christian book. But his books have opened my eyes to possibilities yet unexplored in Christian writing.   
 
I grew up reading science fiction and mystery, like Madeleine L'Engle's A Wrinkle in Time, and only in recent years have I given myself permission to indulge my childhood passion for fantasy once again. I suppose I spent too many years reading court transcripts as a court reporter. I keep telling myself all those years I took depositions (which I didn't enjoy) will show up in a book down the road. Who knows what kind of fantasy I might turn those stories into.
 
I also want to read novels by Ted Dekker and Michael Duncan - books by both are on my Kindle, as well as Malo Bel. New authors I have read in the last year that I enjoyed are Emma Right, Kevin Mark Smith, Michael J. Webb, and Martin Roth. Their books are in the Christian suspense/thriller category as well as fantasy.
 
I have never worried about copying the styles of other authors. But one person who read Seventh Dimension - The Door compared my writing to Australian fantasy author Isobelle Carmody, so I hope to read one of her books soon.
 
It's been great, Janalyn, having you visit the John 3:16 blog. I hope our readers will check out your books, which I highly recommend, with the links below. 

 

 


 


 


Janalyn Voigt's unique blend of adventure, romance, suspense, and fantasy creates worlds of beauty and danger for readers. Tales of Faeraven, her epic fantasy series beginning with DawnSinger, carries the reader into a land only imagined in dreams.
Janalyn is represented by Sarah Joy Freese of Wordserve Literary. Her memberships include ACFW and NCWA.
When she's not writing, Janalyn loves to discover worlds of adventure in the great outdoors.

Author Site for Janalyn Voigt: (author journals, travel journals, guest journals, and book news)
 
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Friday, February 7, 2014

A Taste of Friday with Cheryl Colwell and The Secrets of the Montebellis

Cheryl Colwell












Passionately interested in all things creative, I thrive in Ashland, Oregon. My stories are filled with heart- 
stunning suspense, as ordinary people find supernatural help when plunged into insurmountable circumstances.





The Secrets of the Montebellis
Cheryl Colwell
Inspired Fiction Books
August 30, 2013


Chapter 1

Tension permeated the elegant living room and solidified between them like a rock wall. Smoldering anger darkened Thomas’ expression. Heart pounding, Lisa Richards forced herself to ignore the familiar warning signs and lifted her chin. “Thomas, I need this. I need to do something that’s important to me.”
He rushed at her. She stumbled back, bumping against the wall. The scornful words he spat burned with intimidation. “I provide all of this.” He backhanded the air, just missing her face. “And this is how you repay me?”

She flinched. Repay you? She wanted to scream the words but his glare withered her courage. Dropping her tearing eyes to the plush carpet, she pretended acquiescence. Why? She wondered if her question was why he acted this way or why she put up with his threats.

A quick glance upward caught a smug smile tugging at his lips. He was enjoying this? Heat advanced up her neck and something snapped. She sensed a deep, internal shift in a place she rarely went. Enough. Her hands clenched in unspoken determination. Right or wrong, she would build her dreams. Secretly. Away from his scrutiny.
##
After six years, echoes of that encounter still gripped Lisa’s emotions. A power struggle polluted their life together, invisible as long as she complied. Or appeared to comply. Her fingers absently massaged the tightness behind her breastbone. Even now, this time in the mountain town of Mont Castello should be enjoyable to a married couple, but her heart harbored twenty-nine years of resentment.

She studied the architecture of the restaurant they were approaching as she and Thomas walked in silence. A thin smile of appreciation softened her lips, relaxing the relentless tension. Hand-chiseled stonework gave the building the authentic look of Italy. She climbed the stairs and touched one of the rough timbers that had supported the structure for a century of winters. Embedded in the earth, it claimed as much permanence as the surrounding fir trees, whose roots stretched deep into the rich, dark soil.

A crowd hovered on the porch. Thomas grabbed her hand, pushed in past the waiting customers, and jerked the heavy wooden door open. Avoiding the sea of indignant frowns, Lisa tried to focus on the massive tapestries of Italian street scenes that adorned the amber-toned plaster of the walls.

“I’m Dr. Richards,” Thomas announced, loud enough to turn heads. “I have a reservation. Now.” The distracted young hostess recoiled from his expression, checked her list, and rushed them through the dining room.

As she followed Thomas, an unexpected sight caught Lisa off-guard. Ahead of her sat an extraordinarily attractive man with dark hair and eyes. Intelligent lines distinguished his confident face. He set his glass down and turned to look in her direction. Embarrassed, she closed her mouth and flitted her eyes away.
The hostess seated them at a table situated three feet from the booth of the striking man. Thomas sat down in the chair on the far side, leaving Lisa with the intriguing stranger to her left. Suddenly self-conscious, she was glad when the waitress arrived at their table.

“Would you like to order a drink while you decide?” A lazy southern drawl tinged the woman’s voice.
Lisa opened her mouth to decline, but Thomas cut in. “Sweetheart, bring us a bottle of your best Merlot.”

After watching her husband’s attention follow the curvy waitress, Lisa’s lips tightened and she fixated on the menu. Only once had she expressed her anger at his wandering eyes. He’d twisted her words, leaving her humiliated for imagining he would be unfaithful. She refused to repeat her mistake.
##
Steven Taylor was waiting in a comfortable booth when a loud voice jerked his attention toward the front door of Varano’s restaurant. A pompous man announced himself as Dr. Richards and demanded his table. A lovely woman followed him, looking extremely uncomfortable. Her striking blue eyes caught Taylor’s and darted away. 

He studied her. The summer sun had darkened her olive skin, creating a contrast to the white and orange flowers of her sleeveless blouse. Soft black hair, cut short, accentuated the brightness of her lips. He watched the hostess lead them to a near table. After years of covering news stories and writing investigative reports, Taylor possessed an uncanny insight for reading people. These two seemed at opposite ends of the spectrum.

From his seat, he observed the woman’s profile and the couple’s peculiar interactions. Their waitress asked for a drink order. The woman was about to reply, but the doctor interrupted. Her lips closed without protest and she worked to cover a frown as he gawked at the waitress.

Was this her husband? They appeared to be of similar age—fiftyish. He was clean-cut with salt and pepper hair and an angular jaw. From his sleeveless bicycle jersey, it was obvious he was in town for the three-day bike ride. His small, lean stature and muscled thighs resembled the European riders in the Tour de France.

The doctor downed his first glass of wine and became talkative. He refilled his glass and raised it, “To a great day, Lisa.” She gave him a thin smile, clinked his glass, and sat hers down. Untouched.

So, her name is Lisa and she doesn’t like Merlot, Taylor mused. The name, smart and feminine, fit her looks. The doctor started to describe his ride earlier that day. She nodded at all the right times, but her eyes wandered elsewhere and her delicate fingers toyed with the condensation fogging the outside of her water glass. Taylor shook his head. Relationships were trouble. It was a mystery why people endured them in the first place.

He glanced at a text message on his phone. “First story is where???” His new owner/editor couldn’t resist the opportunity to needle him. They’d tangled on the man’s first day, when he ranted for twenty minutes that Taylor was late for their meeting. By two minutes.

Taking another drink, Taylor lowered his glass and swirled the liquid, replicating the circular motion of bicycle tires. He frowned. Sportswriting for USA Cycle Magazine was his dream job, but with the change in ownership he wasn’t certain what the future held. So far, his manager took the brunt of the insults, encouraging their team of writers that things would eventually settle down. It would be a shame to see the magazine deteriorate.

Since the fiasco with his ex-wife, his job had afforded the diversion he needed, providing great backdrops of cities and towns from which to compose his articles. His first assignment had been the New York Tour. It had been fascinating to watch the cyclists fly past landmark buildings, through streets that were normally jammed with cars.

There had also been trips to the New England countryside when autumn brandished its fiery foliage, and far to the northwest for the Portland Bridge Ride in Oregon. He always took a photographer from the magazine to capture the zest of the events. The portraits of the colorful cyclists crossing the bridges in Portland were extraordinary.

He bit into a piece of garlic bread and glimpsed the pine trees through the front window. Holed up here for the last two days had given him time to explore Mont Castello. He knew that the photographs taken of this area would be even more dramatic.

“No, no, no!” A stern female voice caught Taylor’s attention. By the front door, two red-faced cyclists worked to remove their clipped shoes. Holding onto each other’s shoulders for support, they laughed and swayed precariously until they accomplished their task and walked in socks through the restaurant on the oak floor.

“Hope you have better balance in the saddle,” a friend shouted and slapped one man’s hand with a high five. Laughter rose again while they seated themselves.

Taylor began a draft of his article while he waited at his table:

The Summit Challenge comprises three steep ascents, climbing a total of 22,000 feet. The cyclists will reach heights packed with snow, even in August.

He thumped his pen and recounted the day’s ride, then scribbled:

On day one, riders streaked down, reaching speeds above 40 miles per hour as they navigated the curving road on their descent to the verdant valley below. The sharp, majestic crags rising above the trees were breathtaking, while wide spans of concrete bridges lunged out over whitewater rapids in the giant rivers. The green of the pine forest and red bark of the madrone trees hung behind the circus of colors emblazoned on the rider’s jerseys.

Rereading his notes, he grinned. Not bad.

Varano’s Italian Restaurant was packed. Taylor watched the hungry cyclists devouring pasta, salad, bread—anything to help replace the 3,000 or so calories burned since 5:30 this morning.

His eyes followed Signora Varano, the owner of the restaurant. She stood like an anchor amid the teaming bustle and clanging of heavy china and glass. She had dark but graying hair, thick and wiry. Her straight back exuded authority, but her graciousness extended to her guests. Even now, a frown on her lips deepened while her ebony eyes watched the youthful hostess ignoring new customers and rushing others in an attempt to get her job done.

“Maria,” the signora whispered at the frantic girl. “Slow down. Smile. Be courteous.”

The young woman halted and exhaled. “Thank you, Grand Anna.” Then she moved toward the new guests at a slower pace. Giving them a welcoming smile, she invited them to follow her past Taylor’s table to the back of the room. He recognized the pride in the woman’s eyes as she watched her granddaughter learn the ways of the family.

“Taylor.” An auburn-haired beauty waved a hand in front of his face in an attempt to capture his attention. He spun his head back around and focused on the young woman’s perfectly formed features.
A broad grin covered his face and he stood to embrace his most precious treasure. He covered her hands with his. “Asia, you look beautiful.” He continued to hold her hand as she sat opposite him in the red leather booth. “When did you get in?”

“My plane landed on time, but there was a wait at the car-rental agency.” She leaned over the table and kissed him on the cheek. “It’s so good to see you.” She smiled and sat back, tucking a strand of her long, dark hair behind her ear.

Taylor gazed at her. Asia was 26, beautiful and brilliant. She had achieved her master’s degree in architecture and worked for a major architectural firm in Portland. “Who would have thought our careers would land us in the same area,” he said.

“I know. You are usually on the other side of the world. Now we get to spend a few days together.” 
She grinned with pleasure.

“What are you working on?” he asked.

“An urban renewal program. It’s a great career boost.”
##
Lisa followed her husband’s stare to the attractive young woman who had just arrived and now spoke with the equally arresting man standing to greet her. She called him Taylor.

A quick glance upward revealed that he was a massive man, nearing 6'4", with silver-streaked dark hair and a vibrant grin. Glimpsing their affectionate embrace, Lisa’s heart caught in her throat. Why should that bother me? The answer pierced her. Life was a constant reminder that Thomas’ interest had faded years ago, along with any tenderness he might have had. Pleasing him was impossible.

Stifling a sigh, she grasped for gratitude. Her dreams were coming true, her vision taking shape. Yet, every inch of forward movement had cost her. For years, she’d endured heated disputes with Thomas to let her take a part-time job. Only his vanity allowed her to succeed. After a colleague remarked about his control problem, Thomas began to flaunt her, “freedom do whatever she pleases.”

Working as a receptionist at the Verina Fields Real Estate Agency had given her a start. Soon, an opportunity had presented itself, allowing her to participate in a much grander scheme than she could have imagined. However, it was a high-risk proposition and the businessman she dealt with caused her stomach to twist in knots. Hoping for the best, she continued to ignore the red flags. 

She gulped her water, eyes darting toward Thomas. Like a mother bear hiding her cub from its murderous father, she remained vigilant in keeping her activities concealed. He monitored her time, scrutinized her comments. Across the table, his eyes studied her. She hid a nervous swallow and smiled at the waitress heading their way.

Their server placed Varano’s famous pasta in front of her, creating the diversion she needed to push away her dark thoughts. She dipped into the lasagna, bringing the hot, stringy cheese to her mouth. The scent of warm garlic butter wafted up from the breadbasket and filled the air.

While Thomas recapped his day, Lisa caught glimpses of Taylor holding the hand of the beautiful woman. Thomas’ voice hindered Lisa from hearing the whole of the conversation drifting from the next table, but her heart quickened when she heard fragments of Asia talking about the work she was doing. This young professional enjoyed the liberty to share her inspiring work with no pretense. Envy gripped Lisa.

So what? I’m doing what I want. Still, frustration tugged at her lips. She acted behind the scenes, away from the opportunity for others to know her mind and talents. Through the years, Thomas had painted a demeaning portrait of her with their friends. His comments chipped at her self-confidence, but she was proving her worth, week by week.

The blond waitress refilled their water glasses while Thomas related the vivid details of a crash. “We were streaking down the mountain, hit a hairpin turn and, bang, right in front of us lay a downed rider. The guy must have skidded on the gravel. He was in a world of hurt. Our whole group braked, slid our tails back and dodged any way we could.”

Lisa’s head jerked upward as Taylor stepped to their table. “Please excuse my interruption. I’m Steven Taylor from USA Cycle Magazine.” He held out his hand to Thomas.

Lisa studied the face of the stranger. He was attractive—not pretty like a GQ guy, but strong and solid. His manner suggested sophistication, yet he was casual and disarming. Dark lashes highlighted his deep brown eyes, while his large bone structure accentuated his broad nose and ample lips. He glanced at her and she concealed her eyes with a tilt of her head.

Taylor continued. “I overheard your reference to the crash today and am very interested in interviewing you. Could we set up a time to talk?”

Thomas was exuberant as he shook the big man’s hand. “I am Dr. Thomas Richard. I’ll be riding during the day, but we’ll be back here tomorrow night for dinner. Will that work for you?”
“Tomorrow night would be great, if it’s not too imposing on your company.” Taylor’s eyes moved to Lisa.

Her mouth opened to respond, but Thomas cut in. “Not at all. This is my wife, she’ll be fine with it.”
Taylor didn’t acknowledge him. Realizing he was waiting for her response, Lisa answered with a hasty smile, “I’d be pleased to have you and your guest join us.” She glanced over at Asia.


“I’m sorry,” Asia spoke to the group, “but tomorrow I have business to manage, so he’s on his own.”
Thomas looked back at Taylor, “Well then, does 6:00 suit you, Steven?”

“I’ll be here and, please, call me Taylor.” He sat back down with Asia and continued their conversation.
Thomas finished his meal and headed outside to recount the day’s events with his friend and two flirtatious women riders. Lisa glared at him and finished eating alone.

Twenty minutes later, the server brought the check to the table. Lisa glanced out the front window, took out her credit card, and paid the bill. Catching Taylor’s stare, her face reddened. None of this had missed his notice. His eyes searched her face, threatening to expose the mixture of emotions lodged there.

She bristled. What was he looking for? She didn’t need anyone exploring the complexities of her life. Jerking her eyes downward, she left the restaurant, but could feel his gaze follow her. Instantly, she regretted tomorrow’s dinner arrangements.

She drove their tan truck the twenty miles down to the valley with Thomas’ expensive road bike anchored in the back. His animated talk died down as the effects of an eighty-mile ride at altitude drained his body of its last bit of energy.

The curving mountain road soothed her tension. In the distance beyond Bella Vista, she recognized the small cluster of lights that belonged to the town of Tangle Grove. Her heart lifted.

Her thoughts were her own now and she reflected on how far her dream had come. Her family had helped settle this area and played a major part in the history of Tangle Grove. She wanted to be a part of the town’s development into the charming place that befitted its heritage. Thanks to the involvement of the Montebelli Corporation, she could participate in an important way—if the corporation lived up to its promises.

Thomas snorted in his sleep and she jumped. Resentment swelled. He hated anything to do with her family heritage or Tangle Grove. “Just wait,” she whispered under her breath. Tomorrow would be a landmark day in her career. At 9:00 a.m., she would see a miniature model of her dreams—the embodiment of six years of hard work.

Through careful plotting, secrecy, and, unfortunately, lies, she had succeeded in concealing her involvement from Thomas. She gripped the wheel tighter. Even thinking about her ventures this close to him felt precarious. This project was all she had. At any moment, his discovery could lead to her emotional, and financial, sabotage.